Still having fun with Geppetto (ChatGPT). The results are very directly influenced by the way I word my request. This time I asked him to edit my eBay text into a smooth and easy to read article. It was kind of "smooth plus", because this wasn't just edited into a flowing text, it was "smooth" like a high-dollar commercial campaign. I'm impressed.
I also did some editing. Seems like some minor 'liberties' were taken, and needed to be brought back in line for better description accuracy.
Edited by Chat GPT from the original eBay listing:
Step back in time with this charming and unique vintage find – a double-sized foldout print ad from April 1967, featuring the iconic Kleenex Tissues. Delight in the nostalgia as you explore the beautiful world of softness that Kleenex brought to homes decades ago.
This foldout ad is a true treasure, with a "teaser" page on the external side and a partial article about insurance. On the outer page, is a model styled up in 1960's elegance. It reads "Excuse us while Kleenex tissues slip into something..." As you unfold it, you'll reveal a double-sized centerfold showcasing the captivating model, with the word "beautiful" and three exquisite Kleenex box designs.
The ad proudly displays Kleenex tissues in three gorgeous new decorator boxes, perfect for adding a touch of elegance to any space. Softness and sophistication intertwine, making these tissues not just practical but also a beautiful addition to any room.
Please note that the magazine has aged gracefully, bearing the marks of time with foxing, slight fading, and discoloration, as expected of vintage paper items. Some minor corner and edge damage, as well as gentle ripples, add to its authenticity.
Rest assured that the images you see are the exact pages for sale, meticulously scanned on a black background to preserve their vintage charm. I've taken detailed scans, so you can examine and make your own judgment. Given the complexity, and difficulty of describing how the page folds, I also made a video of this one so you can see the pages turn and how it all fits together.
Though the top and bottom outer corners show a slight bend, the allure of this unique piece remains intact. Additionally, the left edge of the "beautiful!" page may be slightly darker, a testament to its exposure over the years. Despite these slight imperfections, it's a remarkable item that exudes the charm of a bygone era.
Own a piece of history and add a touch of vintage beauty to your collection! Your satisfaction is guaranteed, so seize this opportunity to relive a nostalgic moment with Kleenex Tissues and their captivating decorator boxes.
That's it for GPT. Back to me, now:
The description was very 'smooth sales'... my original descriptions tend to be more blunt, mainly because I'd rather make it sound worse and have people be pleasantly surprised, than have customers upset because it's not as described. I mostly left GPT's work "as is", because it gave me a chuckle to see how it smoothed out my own writing.
I had a hard time figuring out a good way to describe the single-page, double-sized, foldout/centerfold physical aspect of the ad. It's unique (to me at least), and the first time I've listed one like it. So I kind of opted for overkill on the descriptions, plus a video for the explicit purpose of showing physically how the ad is laid out. For as long as the ad is active, you can click on the ad image above, and see the actual eBay page (and video).
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